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Fel In chapter 16 you wrote

“Honey, you’re probably looking at the strongest telepath on this planet,” Symone told her simply.
“Jys is in the top ten percent. She walked through Trelle’s hair before she was born.”
“That means I was lucky,”
Jyslin explained to Molly’s blank look. “And I’m not the strongest.
I think that honor goes to Yari, one of the girls from my squad. Her power is awesome in talent, well beyond
mine, but like me, she just didn’t have the right personality to be a mindbender.


But you Wrote In Chapter two

Yana was the youngest in the squad, just coming out of boot camp and still looking like a teenager with her relatively flat chest and narrow hips, but she was very smart, and she had awesome talent. Yana's telepathic powers outstripped just about everyone in the company.Despite that, she rarely used them, for some odd reason. Where most Marines sent nearly as often as they spoke, Yana virtually never sent.


Shouldn't it have been Yana Not Yari ?

And i can't find any Yari in any other chapter but 16

Phantom

But remember that ALL Marines have extraordinary talent. I think the point here was that she had this really great talent, but didn't use it...

Fiferguy wrote:But remember that ALL Marines have extraordinary talent. I think the point here was that she had this really great talent, but didn't use it...

The point on this one Was who had the Most .....I assume Fel forgot Yana's name and used Yari in it's place.

If you Check the Quotes from the Story you can see what i mean

and Yari only appears One time in the whole story thats in chapter 16
where as Yana is used a lot in the first chapters.

Hopefuly Fel will answer question this soon.

Phantom

yah, I THOUGHT I remembered her name, so I wrote it without checking.

Bad Fel, not doublechecking your notes.

I've already fixed it.

I am rereading the whole series from the beginning and noticed that House Trillane is spelled differently in the first few chapters (Tarlinne). This may have been posted elsewhere, but I was wondering if you had plans to go back and fix some of these typos? And I appologize for my nit-pickiness.