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Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 1:15 am
by Fel
I kinda rushed it a little, but it's done enough.

I hope you guys like it, cause I had a blast writing this one. ;)

Edit by Spec8472: As per usual, Spoiler-ish talk over here

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 2:06 am
by SparkTiger2
yes!!!!!!!!!! omg fel you rock i finally have something to read!

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 2:50 am
by Hearly
Fel, this is such a great freaking Chapter, You better write the next one before Bane 9..


heh, I just gotta see how she handles the next group of His toys..

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 3:07 am
by Fiferguy
WAAAAHHOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!

Thank You...

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:D

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 4:26 am
by Belgarion213
Classic. I loved the chapter, te little war of Jasons was superb, and I can't wait for more of the competition to happen.

Thebit with the bouncy balls was great.

I hope you write the next chapter soon, i was practilly in stiches near the end. Looking forward to chapter 16 soon.
:)

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 6:12 am
by Andygal
LOL! Myeena's hissy fit an the end was HILARIOUS!

Excellent job Fel, you have proved your awesomeness yet again.

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 6:25 am
by Fel
MARBLES! F@#%ING MARBLES!!!!!!!

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 6:58 am
by Dvorak
As teh fiferfellaw said...
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On another note, have a good thanksgiving!

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 7:41 am
by afrigeek
Asante bwana! ( thank you in swahili)

Much appreciated.

Happy thanksgiving. Not being American I am not very sure what thanks giving is. Is it a season when you thank God for his goodness or somethign like that? of late the only thing those of us who watch TV can tell about thanksgiving is that there must be a Turkey...sort of like the way Christmas is about shopping and presents these days.

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 8:00 am
by Fawks
Yahhoooooooooooo!!!! (Texian for Yahoo!)

Now do I want to stay up until 3am to read it??? hmmmmm.... YUP.

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 9:19 am
by afrigeek
oh man!! Did I look weird laughing at my desk in office once I got to the part about the marbles!! Fel, this was more than great!! I really have enjoyed myself. still have tears running down my cheeks because of laughter.

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 9:56 am
by Spec8472
Hot damn! Man, that's gotta be the funniest and BEST chapter ever written.

Seriously - it absolutely ROCKED.

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 9:56 am
by Blyker
This is kinde freaky you know.

I just reread whole subjugation yesterday even though i was halfway in some other stories i just had to reread subjugation.... and then the day after Fell posts a new chapter... creepy

But now im gonna read this :)

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 10:07 am
by Spec8472
afrigeek wrote:Happy thanksgiving. Not being American I am not very sure what thanks giving is. Is it a season when you thank God for his goodness or somethign like that? of late the only thing those of us who watch TV can tell about thanksgiving is that there must be a Turkey...sort of like the way Christmas is about shopping and presents these days.
I'm not American either, so had no real idea about it...

Thanksgiving, according to Wikipedia:
Thanksgiving, or Thanksgiving Day is an annual one-day holiday to give thanks (traditionally to God) at the close of the harvest season. In the United States, Thanksgiving is celebrated on the fourth Thursday of November.
...looks like you wern't far off.

Re: Subjugation, chapter 15.

Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 3:32 pm
by firefox
Its a wild rocking chapter. I have this stupid grin on my face that i am absolutely unable to wipe off. Fel you got my dying to read the next installment..