You'll find the end of the chapter a bit...thin. That's because it's 3am, I'm tired, I'm not going to have time to write tomorrow morning before work, and I promised to have this out to you guys. But it should be enough.
I can always come behind myself later and flesh it out a bit more, but for now, knock yourself out.
Fel,
Brilliant and Intoxicating, answered the questions and created new future possibilities. Great to catch up with the other members of the cast (so to speak )
Thanks for your efforts . All the best for your new scholastic year. Look forward to the chapters to come.
Okay I've got a little unsolicited advice you can take or ignore. I haven't read the new chapter yet, just reading between the lines of your post.
As much as we enjoy this story I think you should be careful about pushing yourself too hard. If it's 3am and you are forcing yourself to finish the chapter for your rabid fans, go to sleep, delay the chapter and release it when you feel comfortable. The other way leads to burnout.
Never write because it's expected. Write because you have to, and the story is making you sit down. The last thing we want is for you to burnout because you force yourself to write when you don't want to, that's left the internet with many unfinished stories from burnt out writers.
Tex
ps- Just finished the chapter. Very nice, you write good stuff.
is there any chance that someone can host a web based version of this chapter soon? i am currently in the military and do not have my personal computer with me, so i am limited to the computers the mwr suplys and they do not allow the download of the file fel posted.
i know that this doesnt consern many besides my self but dangit i want to read to.... *pout*
RedManX wrote:is there any chance that someone can host a web based version of this chapter soon? i am currently in the military and do not have my personal computer with me, so i am limited to the computers the mwr suplys and they do not allow the download of the file fel posted.
i know that this doesnt consern many besides my self but dangit i want to read to.... *pout*
Uhm... Do you have any details of that? It might affect planning decisions..
You're not able to download attachments from a page?
the .doc files can not be downloaded to this computer. i need to wait till there is a adobe file that can be opened in a browser or a html version of the file to view it. its just the fact that downloading any files is forbiden beond normal cookies and what not required to view webpages.
