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FINISHED.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 11:56 pm
by Fel
Got 6 finished.
Ironed out my client issues, and I sent it off to CanisD, Greymist, and Spec. One of them will have a link for the chapter posted sometime soon.
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 11:57 pm
by canisd
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 12:13 am
by MISER
THANK YOU FOR THE PEACE OFFERING FEL.
I HAVE TO JOIN MOMMY DOOM HERE AND GET ON THE DONT FAIL A CLASS OR SACRIFE YOUR LIFE FOR US SOAP BOX. ESPECIALLY IF CLASSES ARE MORE DIFFICULT THAN THEY WERE BEFORE. BESIDES NOT HAVING HAD A REGULAR READING OFFERING I AM NOW ADDICTED (SEMI) TO FREELANCER.
WE ALL HAVE OUR BURDENS TO BEAR AND PRIORITIES TO LIVE WITH.
JOHN
P.S. SINCE THEY ARE HERE, HAPPY HOLIDAYS ALL!
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 12:17 am
by Ric
I hate to be a pain Canis D but that link won`t work.
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 3:03 am
by canisd
http://www.geocities.com/icole/sword6.html
how about this one?
Don't know why it didn't work
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 3:14 am
by Greymist
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 5:37 am
by ginny lesnick
Jeez this story is so great...I love it..Im going to have to stay off of here for a while, because i have read the whole thing so far,,and its killing me to wait and read chapter by chapter...You are a great writer..I wish I had the skill you do..
Thanks for the great story...
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 7:47 am
by qhitch
Great chapter
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 11:20 am
by Weresmilodon
Great chapter, I'll say. Very good.
But i saw that you had written Suld, instead of Pyro, when the demon were talking.
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 11:28 am
by Spec8472
canisd wrote:
Don't know why it didn't work
'cause you cant link direct to hosted files iirc. Geocities blocks files linked to by non-geocities sites (from memory)
That's why you can't put avatar or any picture on there, then include the picture in your profile here...
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 1:10 pm
by MommyDoom
What a [glow=red,2,300]marvelous [/glow] chapter. You see, unlike the boys, I don't miss the blood and guts every now and then. I am much more inclined to appreciate a good bit of plot and character development... such as the tidbits about Mist you gave us in this chapter. I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit more than the last one.. Yeah!
Now, *waggling her Spoon at a shamefaced Fel* get back to your studying, young man! And stop apologizing to us for chapters that take longer than predicted. Yes, we're all addicts but the shakes go away after awhile. ;D
MD
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 7:28 pm
by Wildcat
I'm SO glad I checked this before I had to leave for class. *grins* Wow, this chapter was just great. I agree with MommyDoom in that it's nice to see the plot developed; that's one of the things I like a lot about your works. You have a great balance between the action and the plot/background.
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2003 7:41 pm
by Hallmist
Hm,
Matrix Revolutions and a new Pyrosian Chronicles chapter?
Can this day get any better?
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 4:59 am
by Xel
Another great chapter Fel. Keep up the good work, and the school work.
Re: FINISHED.
Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2003 6:12 am
by Lochar
Question for ya. Since they can now use Sorcery, since it's being drawn directly from Sennadar through Tarrin's sword, doesn't that mean that it's otherworldly, and as such can hurt demons in Pyrosia? Veddy Veddy interesting. ;D