Kharke

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Hi!

I have written a story which is kind of like Sennadar and I thought some of you guys would like to read it =) In fact, it it kinda inspired from the works Fel wrote.

The links:

http://vysnu.com/writing/seven-chapter-1.rtf *
http://vysnu.com/writing/seven-chapter-2.rtf *
http://vysnu.com/writing/seven-chapter-3.rtf *
http://vysnu.com/writing/seven-chapter-4.rtf *

If you would like to say something about the story, you could mail vishnu AT sent DOT com. Thankyou!

Thanks and thanks to Fel for allowing me to post this kinda blatant advert here <g>

http://vysnu.com/log/category/kharke/

Edit: Chapter 4, mail links
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I havn't managed to read the story yet... but is there something wrong with the site? it seems to be all jammed up to the right hand side... which makes it rather annoying to read.

*off to copy/paste it into notepad*

Edit: Okay, read the story...
Seems quite good. Lot of room for expansion and adding detail to the history of the universe.

Let me know when you post an update :)
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Emm...about a girl..

I normally don't read a story when the main character is a girl - yeah yeah yeah - I am a male chauvinist (sp?). Can't help it dude :)
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yeah iv read a couple chapters of your story before and... i want more... like now  ;D
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I found the story interesting and would like to see more
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Geez, another one to add to my extensive list, I want more, please tell us where you put the rest.
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Spec8472: There is an RTF version of the story on the page, just follow that link.

riduan: Almost all the fantasy action stories I've read are about guys... so this is something different <g>

Graewolfe, CanisD, Forbidder: I've posted the story somewhere else anonymously before and I think you can find out where if you have will enough<g> but if you wait a little, I'm working on expanding and polishing up chapters 2-5. I'll have chapter 2 up soon =)

Thanks for your comments guys =) When I have a little more time, I'll also upload all of my Sennadar and other Fel's works onto my site to serve as a mirror if Fel wants it so.
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What is it with you people, me, me, me, want, want, want...

*gets down on his knees and begs qhitch for more chapters* hehe ;)
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forbidder wrote:Geez, another one to add to my extensive list, I want more, please tell us where you put the rest.
Would you mind terribly much sharing your extensive list with us? :)

I'm running out of things to read --- I've re-read all the books I own. (apart from all of the Tolkien books, i don't know why but whenever i sit down and actually try to read them, i find myself nodding off).  Most of the online books/series I used to read have been finished, or are on hold while the authors take a break.

I'm actually considering reading those VB.NET 2003 books i've got...  Though the Baen Free Library has managed to save me atleast for one more day...
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spec8472 wrote:
Would you mind terribly much sharing your extensive list with us? :)

I'm running out of things to read --- I've re-read all the books I own. (apart from all of the Tolkien books, i don't know why but whenever i sit down and actually try to read them, i find myself nodding off). Most of the online books/series I used to read have been finished, or are on hold while the authors take a break.

I'm actually considering reading those VB.NET 2003 books i've got... Though the Baen Free Library has managed to save me atleast for one more day...
LOL!...ever heard of "elfwood"? Tons of fantasy stories written by some budding authors and amateurs. Some are really good! Some are just so so. Some - well you can give a miss...:)

Check the URL: http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/libr/highfantasy.html
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Baen books made a cd containing the Honer Harrington serie's by david weber

link ;D Honor Harrington
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Well, can't have that people run out of things to read, can we?
Posted some of these links on the old webboard, but maybe not everybody got them and I might have some new ones, can't remember exactly what I posted before.

There is pretty good science fiction to be found at:
http://www.geocities.com/soho/bistro/2197/

some shadowrun fan fiction, better than some of the published books (although in some cases that isn't saying much)
http://www.shapcano.com

sf-furry, although not the semi-erotic kind, just sf that happens to have feline aliens
http://www.furry.de/charon/Fiction.html

the family nas-kan, pretty sure I've posted this already, but it is good enough to bear posting twice
http://www.nas-kan.org/stories/stories.html

more sf-furry fiction, ignore the drawings, I'm afraid they are not really that good, but the fiction is worth reading, especially the longer pieces
http://www.furnation.com/jonwi/stories.html

well, these are all that I can think off, the baen library has already been mentioned, of course, as well as elfwood. Oh, one more thing, but I'm sure that it is not really legal...
*snip*

enjoy!
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BWHAHAA thank you borsic, finaly completly new stuff to read.
if you havent read any of Enterprise1701_d's work i highly recomend it, http://www.maddmansrealm.com/Enterprise1701_d/

as well as Nikolai Mirovich probably one of the best fanfic writers iv ever read, the correct order to read them is in the faq a believe http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Nikolai_Mirovich/
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Well this is my collection of readings, hope you enjoy

Strider1 of FictionPress.net has a good series in my opinion some may not like it but I do so yea.
http://www.fictionpress.com/profile.php?userid=76890

This site has links to a lot of free novels.
http://starry.com/novel/authors.htm

The Heretic is one of my favorite novels, it's for those computer enthusiasts out there.
http://happyhacker.org/heretic/

Thats about all I have to recommend right now, I hope you enjoy.
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lain wrote:Baen books made a cd containing the Honer Harrington serie's by david weber

link ;D Honor Harrington

Yes yes yes! :) Thats the first book i picked up out of the Baen books site... Excellent read. After reading until 4am on Saturday Night / Sunday Morning (AU time) to finish the first "chapter" (though it was really more like a whole book), I immediately went and charged up my failing iPaq (damn built in LiIon batteries!) and loaded up everything from the author's page on Baen Free Library... Infact, it caused me to go lay down some hard cash and buy a new handheld with more battery life (1.5hrs of reading on it isn't exactly generous)

Now, this is distracting me from reading more of Ms Harringtons stories :)

(Oh, and when they say it's like CS Forrester's Hornblower series -- They're dead on, I watched every episode of the excellent TV series that the BBC produced from that series of books.)

....back to reading about the Baselisk Station... :)

Thanks to everyone who posted the links to other books. Certainly appreciated, I'll be reading them all just as soon as I can... :)
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