Thor's Child -Updated thru Chapter 11

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Thor's Child -Updated thru Chapter 11

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Well, I went into the hospital again on Tuesday, and saw 3 different Opthalmologists, several doctors and countless nurses, but more important, after last week's treatment, I could see enough to type. On top of that I wasn't kept in a darkened room and I was able to bring along a laptop (just as long as it didn't have Wifi capability!) -- so I was able to finish Chapter 11. FINALLY!

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Great m8,
sure hope that this means that you're getting better
thanks for all the hard work

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GBLW wrote:Well, I went into the hospital again on Tuesday, and saw 3 different Opthalmologists, several doctors and countless nurses, but more important, after last week's treatment, I could see enough to type. On top of that I wasn't kept in a darkened room and I was able to bring along a laptop (just as long as it didn't have Wifi capability!) -- so I was able to finish Chapter 11. FINALLY!

Here 'tis.
Thor's Child P-11.zip
Thank you! I am glad your vision is improving, here's hoping it will continue to do that steadily.

The new chapter is nice. At one point, I thought there was too much "snapping" by the girls (at lunch), but I guess a strong PMS explains that.
I see you the story is starting to address the puzzle of Tor's subdued puberty.

Methinks Tor should learn a few "real" magic tricks, to demonstrate, if pressed, that it's all prestidigitation tricks.

On another topic, I wonder if his dislike of offensive Taekwondo is somehow related to his talents. I recall in L.E. Modesitt's Recluce novels, (some of) the Order adepts were superb at defense, but were nearly useless at attack.
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samuelmichaels wrote: . . . At one point, I thought there was too much "snapping" by the girls (at lunch), but I guess a strong PMS explains that.
I see you the story is starting to address the puzzle of Tor's subdued puberty.

Methinks Tor should learn a few "real" magic tricks, to demonstrate, if pressed, that it's all prestidigitation tricks.

On another topic, I wonder if his dislike of offensive Taekwondo is somehow related to his talents. I recall in L.E. Modesitt's Recluce novels, (some of) the Order adepts were superb at defense, but were nearly useless at attack.
To quote a long dead author -- (whose name is lost in the mists of memory) -- "Patience, little one, and all will be explained."
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I can not open zip files can anyone email the file to me?
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No problem here. Download and install WinRar for free from download.com
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Unfortunately my computer us getting fixed and I am stuck only using my iPhone. I can normally download text files just not zip files.
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ah that would be a problem... time to invest in a 2nd computer, or just a netbook or something.
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Yeah I hear u. It worked fine till i let my gf use my computer.
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Frankiek1 wrote:Unfortunately my computer us getting fixed and I am stuck only using my iPhone. I can normally download text files just not zip files.
In this case, even as the author, I can't help you -- you see I didn't write the last chapter in text -- I wrote it directly in .html, then zipped and posted it. (unfortunately, I posted it without editing and I've already heard about a few glitches I didn't catch.)

KP

PS; Send me PM if .html will work for you and I'll try to upload it to an e-mail in that format.
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Thanks everyone. I got the chapter and can't wait to read it!
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Thanks!

I hope you continue to improve health wise. Some how we just aren't as resilient as we were at 20 anymore!

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Glad the eyesight is getting better and for the new chapter.....keep it coming. This is my enjoyment with me having cancer and not being able to walk...love it so far.....something I use a lot is Dragon to read to me and to type when I can't get up. Hope to see more soon.
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Thanks for the great chapter! I am glad you are feeling a bit better and able to write a bit. Don't work too hard, we will just have to wait patiently for the next chapter. (Yeah, like that's going to happen! :wink: )
I'm not completely mad, there are bits missing!
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