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Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 2:58 am
by Fel
This "short story" has already gone longer than I thought it would, and I'm not sure how much longer it will go.

But, for what it's worth, enjoy.

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:01 am
by Hearly
whoot first

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:13 am
by deane
wow 2nd for the first time. thanks fel keep up the good work!

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:22 am
by Prymael
hope this finds you and yours doing well.

thanks fel

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:32 am
by crxbnt
Holy cow! Just thought I'd check before heading to bed, and suprise!

Thanks Fel, guess I am staying up for a while yet!

crxbnt

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:35 am
by RobJ
Thanks Fel,
Went to vote, NZ elections today, get back to this great surprise. Thank you :D

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:04 am
by Mysterious
YES! :D

THANK YOU FEL! 8)

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:52 am
by ThisAndThat1
Good deal - something fun to look at besides assorted acft going bump in the night.

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:57 am
by Cougar2k2
Darn wish I would have been paying attention... I could have read this tonight instead of having to wait till tomorrow. Anyway much appreciated Fel.

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:06 am
by jobeller
Thank you!

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:32 am
by gesit
great m8
just for the weekend
thanks

ham

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 5:38 am
by Mansoor B. K.
7th in line, i hope

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 10:30 am
by the_scot
What an outstanding chapter!!!! Please take your time and don't rush this one through, as you have laid the groundwork for something epic. The characters have been developed, but you are deepening and enriching their personalities. You now have a couple of subplots that will come back around later and you have created what I consider a totally unique plot/story line that could/should ultimately end with a Generation on the throne. Not because of her being part of a 'Master Race' but because she's been prepared by both parents to be the best thing for her people, for ALL the people.

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:51 am
by Gabriel
Ahhhh..... finally here is 6 :D

Re: Unification, chapter 6.

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:08 pm
by garion
woohoo great charter :D :D :D