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insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 10:57 pm
by Fel
Here ya go.
Chapter 6 will wrap up this story, and it will probably be short.
Spoilers Discussion in the Spoilers thread only, please.
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:10 pm
by Blyker
Nice now go to bed or read, read or sleep hmm.....
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:11 pm
by Hearly
Dang 2nd this time
heh
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2008 11:18 pm
by wildph
doh, thought I might've gotten first response..
My PDF copy is online:
http://homepage.mac.com/wildph/
I want some of what Fel's eating.. I'm going self employed.. to be able to work so quickly..
respect, man.
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:18 am
by wolfy
YAY! Very Nice Fel!!
I'm sure we'll see this Consortium again. One might wonder if some how or other they've had dealings with someone from House Karinne in the past. I find it interesting they seemed to know where Cybi's bunker is... Hopefully Fel will answer all the little nagging questions in the story as he goes along!
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:25 am
by Fiferguy
Fel, I love it. Thanks for a great chapter.
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:44 am
by Phantom
Great chapter ....
and I'm begining to see Several more posiable Storys in the future.
Phantom
( hoping they won't all end up as Christmas Presents )
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:56 am
by boballab
wolfy wrote:YAY! Very Nice Fel!!
I'm sure we'll see this Consortium again. One might wonder if some how or other they've had dealings with someone from House Karinne in the past. I find it interesting they seemed to know where Cybi's bunker is... Hopefully Fel will answer all the little nagging questions in the story as he goes along!
Yeah that was one thing that stood out in my mind, how they knew where the bunker was.
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:07 am
by Mizriath
Thanks Fel... You made my day.
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:51 am
by lagomilo
Thanks again Fel for a great chapter. You've got over 85k words written so far. Most good novels avg around 70k. The thing that tickles me is that this is a short story for you.
Again thanks,
lagomilo
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 5:11 am
by Lokis Advisor
Fel thanks for another great wander through you fertile imagination.
I enjoyed it as always.
Look foward to any more twist and turns that you care to throw our way.
and thanks for posting after I got to work
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 6:26 am
by gesit
great chapter m8
love it, thanks
ham
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 6:45 am
by Journeywoman
boballab wrote:wolfy wrote:YAY! Very Nice Fel!!
I'm sure we'll see this Consortium again. One might wonder if some how or other they've had dealings with someone from House Karinne in the past. I find it interesting they seemed to know where Cybi's bunker is... Hopefully Fel will answer all the little nagging questions in the story as he goes along!
Yeah that was one thing that stood out in my mind, how they knew where the bunker was.
If you think about it, they were monitoring the Karis system. The Aegis definately sat itself in synchronized orbit around Kosiningi. It is not a big strech that other ships did as well. This could have drawn attention to the island or island region. The military/other traffic would have further pinpointed the area. Scans/communication monitoring if it was possible would have confirmed it. Basically if they were good enough spies or had enough time, they could have figured it out.
Anyway, another great chapter Fel
. Can't wait for the conclusion.
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 7:43 am
by fear1222
Another great chapter Fel. I love the new posting times. So close together!!
Re: insurrection, chapter 5
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:24 am
by Mysterious
Great Work Fel!