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Boz0 d^ Clone wrote: I've been trying to find a story that I'd read on Stories On Line years ago and since then completely lost everything but a vague idea of the theme.

It was about an obese kid who's initials were ELF. Seems that he was the offspring of a queen and a warrior and he was growing up in 'our world'. He was abused by family and 'friends'. So much so, that after making a sword in metal-shop he decided to 'end it all' by running himself through with said sword. This brought about his transformation into the buff guy who was going to bring the magical and non-magical worlds back together (I think?)

One scene of note was where some bullies killed his dog.
Boz0 d^ Clone

Boz0 d^ Clone wrote: I've been trying to find a story that I'd read on Stories On Line years ago and since then completely lost everything but a vague idea of the theme.

It was about an obese kid who's initials were ELF. Seems that he was the offspring of a queen and a warrior and he was growing up in 'our world'. He was abused by family and 'friends'. So much so, that after making a sword in metal-shop he decided to 'end it all' by running himself through with said sword. This brought about his transformation into the buff guy who was going to bring the magical and non-magical worlds back together (I think?)

One scene of note was where some bullies killed his dog.
Boz0 d^ Clone

fortress wrote:Giants in the Sandbox by Zoras
http://storiesonline.net/story/60078
Science Fiction
Earth is caught in the middle when two Galactic races involved in a bloodfeud fight a battle above Earth. In the aftermath of the fighting, one man seeks to hide out till things get better, only to find out that the best laid plans of mice and men often go astray.

Posted: 2009-04-17
in progress (updated 2010-12-22) [More Info]

HashimotoYukari wrote:hi. im looking for a story on SOL(storiesonline.net). it's a story about a pale soldier who easly got sunburnt, so he have to apply lots of sunscreen. he become a soldier because his wife and unborn child died(after she was kidnap by her ex-boyfriend who he kill). he was sent with another soldier to kindnap a general. to make the mission sucessful he stay behind sniping enemy soldier(he has a death wish) while the other soldier take the general back. he eventualy killing all enemy soldier in their camp. he was shot 2 time(i think), but he still manage walk back to friendlies camp and capturing 2 enemy soldier. he's call sign 'ghost'. i think he's an empath. and he talk to himself(caused by infection).
thanks for the help.

samuelmichaels wrote:

HashimotoYukari wrote:hi. im looking for a story on SOL(storiesonline.net). it's a story about a pale soldier who easly got sunburnt, so he have to apply lots of sunscreen. he become a soldier because his wife and unborn child died(after she was kidnap by her ex-boyfriend who he kill). he was sent with another soldier to kindnap a general. to make the mission sucessful he stay behind sniping enemy soldier(he has a death wish) while the other soldier take the general back. he eventualy killing all enemy soldier in their camp. he was shot 2 time(i think), but he still manage walk back to friendlies camp and capturing 2 enemy soldier. he's call sign 'ghost'. i think he's an empath. and he talk to himself(caused by infection).
thanks for the help.

Sounds like Second That Emotion by Latikia

lagomilo wrote:

fortress wrote:Giants in the Sandbox by Zoras
http://storiesonline.net/story/60078
Science Fiction
Earth is caught in the middle when two Galactic races involved in a bloodfeud fight a battle above Earth. In the aftermath of the fighting, one man seeks to hide out till things get better, only to find out that the best laid plans of mice and men often go astray.

Posted: 2009-04-17
in progress (updated 2010-12-22) [More Info]

Thanks that was it. had my settings wrong and couldn't see it anymore.

lago

HashimotoYukari wrote: if you click on the zora'a page, you will get a page 'Sorry, Can't find any stories for this author to display for you.'( not sure if it only happen to me). this isn't the only author that go to this kind page but if you have a direct link to the stories you can still see it, no idea why, maybe some part of the site is down or links are missing.

lagomilo wrote:

fortress wrote:Giants in the Sandbox by Zoras
http://storiesonline.net/story/60078
Science Fiction
Earth is caught in the middle when two Galactic races involved in a bloodfeud fight a battle above Earth. In the aftermath of the fighting, one man seeks to hide out till things get better, only to find out that the best laid plans of mice and men often go astray.

Posted: 2009-04-17
in progress (updated 2010-12-22) [More Info]

Thanks that was it. had my settings wrong and couldn't see it anymore.

lago

HashimotoYukari wrote:yup thats it. thanks samuelmichaels for the help.

samuelmichaels wrote:

HashimotoYukari wrote:hi. im looking for a story on SOL(storiesonline.net). it's a story about a pale soldier who easly got sunburnt, so he have to apply lots of sunscreen. he become a soldier because his wife and unborn child died(after she was kidnap by her ex-boyfriend who he kill). he was sent with another soldier to kindnap a general. to make the mission sucessful he stay behind sniping enemy soldier(he has a death wish) while the other soldier take the general back. he eventualy killing all enemy soldier in their camp. he was shot 2 time(i think), but he still manage walk back to friendlies camp and capturing 2 enemy soldier. he's call sign 'ghost'. i think he's an empath. and he talk to himself(caused by infection).
thanks for the help.

Sounds like Second That Emotion by Latikia

if you click on the zora'a page, you will get a page 'Sorry, Can't find any stories for this author to display for you.'( not sure if it only happen to me). this isn't the only author that go to this kind page but if you have a direct link to the stories you can still see it, no idea why, maybe some part of the site is down or links are missing.

lagomilo wrote:

fortress wrote:Giants in the Sandbox by Zoras
http://storiesonline.net/story/60078
Science Fiction
Earth is caught in the middle when two Galactic races involved in a bloodfeud fight a battle above Earth. In the aftermath of the fighting, one man seeks to hide out till things get better, only to find out that the best laid plans of mice and men often go astray.

Posted: 2009-04-17
in progress (updated 2010-12-22) [More Info]

Thanks that was it. had my settings wrong and couldn't see it anymore.

lago

samuelmichaels wrote:
You may not see the story if your Access Level Setting is set to "Filtered", because of the codes on the story.

HashimotoYukari wrote:

samuelmichaels wrote:
You may not see the story if your Access Level Setting is set to "Filtered", because of the codes on the story.

i have set my Access Level Setting to "full access". But still, I cant see some of author page. All I got was "Sorry, Can't find any stories for this author to display for you".

Also does anyone has a link to Frank Downey stories? Cant find it at SOL. I wonder if its taken down. I remember he has some really good stories. Thanks.

fortress wrote:

fortress wrote:The book was Blessings of a Curse by Wc63. He pulled that book and People of the Tiger sometime last year with no explanation on his blog there.

edit: I just double checked and he has them both back up on lulu.com for purchase, he had taken them off here at the same time as SOL so not sure when they got put back up.

Blessings of a Curse - By Wayne Edward Clarke
http://www.lulu.com/product/file-downlo ... se/5149589

further googling reveals his website where they are also up for sale
http://wayneedwardclarke.viviti.com/fan ... ce-fiction

In June 2009 I posted rough drafts of these books to a fiction website, and asked the readers to rate and critique them, and let me know how they compared to the best-sellers in their genres. They were given averaged ratings of 9.36 and 9.37 out of 10. I was flabbergasted by the hundreds of wildly enthusiastic email responses! Many wrote to say that one or the other is the best book they ever read, and one guy even threatened to hunt me down and duct-tape me to my computer chair until the sequels were finished!

I've since completely re-edited both of these books, with consideration for the suggestions of their many readers, and they are much improved for it. I know you'll enjoy them, and I'll have the next sequels out as soon as possible!

He just started re-posting People of the Tiger to SOL and also has it for free from his website.

http://wayneedwardclarke.viviti.com/