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Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:43 pm
by MommyDoom
Fabulous. Intricate. Your writing gets better, more mature, and more descriptive all the time. It's always a pleasure to read. Your Dwarven Dain character, Darax, becomes more complex every time you mention him, which I enjoy. Layers upon layers, revealed all in good time.
I'm interested to see what happens with the Elara. Your foreshadowing of them a few chapters ago was well done and has me curious.
Most importantly, I'm glad you are well again. How's school going?
mommydoom
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 11:50 pm
by Stealth_Dragon
And Mist gets a new trophy
Great Chapter 8)
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 3:24 am
by Wildcat
I must echo everyone: Great chapter! I was wondering what kind of a demon they'd pull up to fight him.... Looking forward to that battle.
I think the funniest part was Phandlebrass casting Meteor. It got me thinking about common videogame spells and what they'd really do if game designers allowed them to affect the landscape.
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 3:31 am
by Lochar
wildcat wrote:I must echo everyone: Great chapter! I was wondering what kind of a demon they'd pull up to fight him.... Looking forward to that battle.
I think the funniest part was Phandlebrass casting Meteor. It got me thinking about common videogame spells and what they'd really do if game designers allowed them to affect the landscape.
Save the world by destroying it? I'm thinking KoTR from FF7.
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:34 am
by hatten_jc
fel wrote:ok, done with 14, but given the ugly fact that the IRC chat channel only had Weresmilodon in it, I'm stuck as to how to get it out. So, I'm putting up a temporary link to the chapter.
(Edit by Spec8472) Here's the new links:
MS Word Format
HTML Format
(End of Edit)
We really need to figure out what to do about IRC...we need a stable network where everyone can go. Anyone have any suggestions?
Enjoy everyone.
Great work. I actuly think your writing style is geting bether with eatch episode.
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 10:58 am
by Journeywoman
Great work
. Can't wait fot the next chapter.
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 12:58 pm
by Taltos
that's great!
but i swear, fel, one day your affinity to cliffhangers will kill me. that's almost as bad as stopping in the middle of a sentence.. ;D
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:15 pm
by Mr_Alpha
Great chapter, you've got me praying for the next one.
One thing: How can one instant death be more agonizing than another instant death? ;D
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 6:33 pm
by Ishen_Wolf
Quoting all the replies before this one:
Great Chapter!!
I really like the, how can you call them, the battle chapters. Like this one, like the one in Suld. Great work!!
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 5:27 am
by Fawks
j-man5 wrote:Fel,
I know that Shadowhawk and I are both on irc.inteliinternet.com #ewp alot. How about switching servers to that network?
J-Man5
I too use the EWP chatroom. Although, I use a different alias.
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 3:50 pm
by J-Man5
What Alias?
J-Man5
Re: chapter 14 is done
Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 9:45 pm
by Harod
I started reading your work about ten days ago and have become so interested in your writting that I have read some of your other works. How do you keep your train of thought. Thank you for another great chapter.