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A most amazing chapter, excellent story

that is one sneaky fox but i wonder what power is gained with the transformation
lets read and find out

the this truning into a great book and i must have more and more

ooo u can be one sick puppy but you did warn us it would be grafic



thanks fel

good writing, but I have to agree with an earlier comment about not being too forgiving as your characters, I hope he peals them... I won't spoil it by stating who "them" or they, or he or she is.

~Michaelsuave

great , a good one,
thanks

ham

Lochar wrote:You do realize UPS doesn't do Sunday delivery, right? Especially when you make a request to have a non-standard driver.

First post.

Damn them and after all I went through casting that spell to replicate all those ....errr I mean all the time i took to find all those Pennies

But according to the UPS Tracking page they were delivered this morning.
UPS reported you weren't at home so they left them and the SuperModel with one of your Neighbor's


So we should be good right ?


Phantom

What a chapter. one of the ugly facets of mankind in all its splendor. I was so involved that I had to concentrate to let go of my anger at the end. harsh lesson for sure.it is an unforgiving forging the fox has chosen. with this chapter the story has officially gone from an addiction to a mild obsession.

As Tolkien once said " Let him not vow to walk in the dark, who has not seen the darkness fall.”

Great great chapter.

thanks fel

Mm... Fel, would you please spoil to us readers what chapter Kyv is finally going to start kicking ass and taking names again? I'd like to resume reading this story once this 'arc' is over because I really just want to see how the revenge will be played...

Dvorak, there's some nifty stuff going on you'd miss if you wait for this story arc to end, aside from the impossibility of Fel's ending a story arc...

da Bad Mans doesn't control the money, etc., his wife does, and it looks to me like his behaviour may result in her, and their kids, swinging more towards the Masked; as usual with his totem, more than just Kyven will be changed, they be layers upon layers, yes/no?