chapter 10 of Subjugation done

[Fel]

New chapter's done.

Logged onto IRC, passed it around, link will come soon.

It's late because it's long...like 37 pages.

Hope you enjoy it.

Updated by Spec8472
Links:
HTML: http://sennadar.plebian.net/other/subjugation/sub10.htm
DOC: http://sennadar.plebian.net/other/subjugation/sub10.doc

[J-Man5]

Here is a temporary link.

http://www.pc-assoc.com/sub10.doc

http://www.pc-assoc.com/sub10.html

J-Man5

[Shadowhawk]

http://www.pc-assoc.com/sub10.doc
http://www.pc-assoc.com/sub10.html

Temporary link as well (as usual: if you see image before link, then my site is up)
http://193.0.122.19:8010/sennadar/sub10.doc
(I do mirror/backup only Tarrin Kael Chronicles, and only in HTML format).

[codewarrior]

Oh greart, humbel and powerful one thank you for blessing us, meager goundling in this play of life, with your mystical talents. Thank you, thank you Fel.l

[Graewolfe]

bah and you wer worrying about how wed react to sword17 BAH the end of sub10 is much worse :'( id like more of subjugation PLZZZZ!!?
but really do whatever you want to write however fast what we think about your yummy goodness of storys is only secondary to how you want to work on them... that said PLEASE more on subjugation sometime near future

[Hearly]

Whoot, great chapter Fel, can't wait for 11

[Spec8472]

Wholly Carp, new Subjugation chapter.

Very nice chapter, definitely worth the wait.

I spent my lunch hour (+2hrs) reading it

Love everything in it -- lots of interesting detail I can spend hours re-reading

Oh damn, I think I'm now in trouble... uh-oh, gotta do that report.

[MechCraft]

Thankyou, Thankyou, Thankyou

its good to get a booster shot of interlectual material ;D

great chapter Fel keep up the great work

[Forbidder]

oh my cow!

that was amazing!  But now you got me clamoring for the next one...  subjugation always does this for me, after reading one, I just want more.  It's more addictive than potato chips or crisps..

(stunned speechless reliving the chapter)

[zedd]

It just keeps getting better....

[thisandthat]

Great Green Gobs of Purple Peanut Butter!

What a chapter!!!

[Fel]

Someday you guys are going to have to explain this mysterious obsession with Subjugation.

I mean, I go back and reread it and, well, seems OK to me.

Not great, not fantastic, just OK.

Heck, I write this as a fun distraction from the main project, lol.  I'm not even halfway serious about it.  I haven't put much research or preparation into it, I just kinda sit down and type after I think about where the story should go.

Then again, I guess that's why I kinda like writing it.  No preparation.  No research.  No intricate plot wrangling.  Just sit down and type away, and let the story write itself.

[MechCraft]

Someday you guys are going to have to explain this mysterious obsession with Subjugation.

I mean, I go back and reread it and, well, seems OK to me.

Not great, not fantastic, just OK.

Heck, I write this as a fun distraction from the main project, lol.  I'm not even halfway serious about it.  I haven't put much research or preparation into it, I just kinda sit down and type after I think about where the story should go.

Then again, I guess that's why I kinda like writing it.  No preparation.  No research.  No intricate plot wrangling.  Just sit down and type away, and let the story write itself.

Fel, i believe it is because it writes its self that we the readers are captavated.
subjugation has a "real-life flow" there is a very subtle "tell" that says it is not mapped out before-hand.

and is because it gives the impression that subjugatuion could happen here tomorrow. and it does this in a way that is believeable.

you write it as a grandfather would tell a grandson a story of his past. words that have a enbellished truth to them, but you are able to see where the origins of that  was formed.


i think everyone here would agree and say something similar. your writing style is a powerfull one! it comes from your heart and mind working in harmony.

Keep up the great work and you will deffinitly have a very loyal fanclub for a very long time!!!.

[avitchel]

Gee Fel, why do we like it? Great characters, interesting themes, lots of different conflicts. I can't pick a single reason, but I'm sure that we all can tell that you're having fun when you write it. Maybe it's the allure of Space Opera, maybe it's just the wonder of what you're going to have these people do next.
All of the above reasons have something to do with the attraction of the story. Even with the angst of the imperial oppression, it's still seems light and hopeful. Others??
All I can say is, that you have my continuing thanks for sharing it with us!